Teen Poetry #4 |
All Reigning Defiance |
Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
All Reigning Defiance: The conformity of speech. A raised hand to talk. Being free is thought, And thought is dead. Live to defy yourself. Die in spite of others. It's everything around. It's all that you are. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Great Job. And Yet another masterpiece! Always, ~Catherine |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Short, but strong. "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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CareBear3 Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 39New Hampshire |
I thought this was really insightful, its ironic that its words and thoughts that make us unique, but in reality what we say is just a mimic of what we are, its what we do that counts. At least thats what I saw in here nice job. "In great moments life seems neither right nor wrong but something greater it seems inevitable" ~Kelley |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
*speechless*... Dopey That was soo wonderful, as well as held great power. How inspiring. Thank you for shareing this with us. *~*Amanda*~* What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is great! |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
i just barly get it. but i like how short it is but still powerfull, that is the kind of poetry that i like somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Powerful words I feel you |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
no idea what that was about i like the wordage im so lost... maybe its my sorrow kicking in please let us dig into the mind of the great dopey ~JDR "I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking." |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
good one,,, I like it a lot. Just Thanking you for reading my poetry which in turn I like yours.... Kim Rayann |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
Dopey!!..a society poem!!... finally, universal substance...i love it!!!... and can in all truth say i know exactly what it's about ..outstanding work "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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DreadedLiver Member
since 2001-01-23
Posts 56Alter, Ego |
wow this was very neat i didnt even realize it might be about society until anonmaly stated it very great, bravo -Knightfellow ""I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking." |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Ha, ever so true now isn't it? I agree with Hallie. Love ya! Allysa I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
oustanding Dopes I have wordto describe you and your writing "TALENT" I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"Live to defy yourself." You know what? If I remember (highly unlikely) I'll do this tomorrow, just for you. Ok And if it goes good, I'll defy that and go back, and then defy that and go back to being changed and then defy that and go back again. Ok? And yeah, I've been taking a little break from the forum for a few days. It started feeling like a chore instead of being enriched by the talent that is being shared. So now I'm half committed back into it, but homework sucks and I might be starting to get a life (ha) so I'll try to post when I can "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
it is a great poem. full of power. regina sin from my lips? O tresspass sweetly urged!give me my sin again! W. Skakespeare |
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