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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 2001-01-29 12:13 PM


All Reigning Defiance:


The conformity of speech.
A raised hand to talk.
Being free is thought,
And thought is dead.

Live to defy yourself.
Die in spite of others.
It's everything around.
It's all that you are.




I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

© Copyright 2001 Pepe de la Muerte - All Rights Reserved
Hallie_Angel
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1 posted 2001-01-29 12:20 PM


Great Job.
And Yet another masterpiece!

                           Always,
                              ~Catherine

HiddenSparklez
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2 posted 2001-01-29 01:05 AM


Short, but strong.  

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

CareBear3
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since 2000-11-20
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3 posted 2001-01-29 05:13 PM


I thought this was really insightful, its ironic that its words and thoughts that make us unique, but in reality what we say is just a mimic of what we are, its what we do that counts.  At least thats what I saw in here nice job.

"In great moments life seems neither right nor wrong but something greater it seems inevitable"

~Kelley

Angel in Flight
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4 posted 2001-01-29 07:14 PM


*speechless*... Dopey That was soo wonderful, as well as held great power. How inspiring. Thank you for shareing this with us. *~*Amanda*~*

What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda


katherine
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5 posted 2001-01-29 09:34 PM


this is great!
litle_krazy_poet
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6 posted 2001-01-29 10:35 PM


i just barly get it. but i like how short it is but still powerfull, that is the kind of poetry that i like

somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

TrueLUV
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7 posted 2001-01-29 10:38 PM


Powerful words I feel you
jeremydraul
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State of Despair
8 posted 2001-01-29 10:40 PM


no idea what that was about
i like the wordage
im so lost... maybe its my sorrow kicking in
please let us dig into the mind of the great dopey

~JDR

"I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking."

~*Buffy Summers*~
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9 posted 2001-01-29 10:46 PM


good one,,, I like it a lot. Just Thanking you for reading my poetry which in turn I like yours....


Kim Rayann

anomaly187
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10 posted 2001-01-29 10:47 PM


Dopey!!..a society poem!!...
finally, universal substance...i love it!!!...
and can in all truth say i know
exactly what it's about
..outstanding work

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"


DreadedLiver
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11 posted 2001-01-29 11:05 PM


wow
this was very neat
i didnt even realize it might be about society until anonmaly stated it
very great, bravo

-Knightfellow


""I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking."

Allysa
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12 posted 2001-01-30 08:28 AM


Ha, ever so true now isn't it? I agree with Hallie. Love ya!
Allysa

I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad.


Acies
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13 posted 2001-01-30 07:21 PM


oustanding Dopes
I have wordto describe you and your writing
"TALENT"

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Lakewalker
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14 posted 2001-01-30 09:55 PM


"Live to defy yourself."

You know what?  If I remember (highly unlikely) I'll do this tomorrow, just for you.  Ok   And if it goes good, I'll defy that and go back, and then defy that and go back to being changed and then defy that and go back again.  Ok?  
And yeah, I've been taking a little break from the forum for a few days.  It started feeling like a chore instead of being enriched by the talent that is being shared.  So now I'm half committed back into it, but homework sucks and I might be starting to get a life (ha) so I'll try to post when I can


"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Ina
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15 posted 2001-01-31 09:48 AM


it is a great poem. full of power.
regina

sin from my lips? O tresspass sweetly urged!give me my sin again!
W. Skakespeare

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