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luvnkris
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Perth, Australia

0 posted 2001-01-28 09:44 PM


Thankyou for always loving me,
Even when I screw up
Your trust and belief in me
Comes through everytime

Thankyou for always being there for me
Whenever I need a friend
The way you comfort and love me
Is exactly what I need

Thankyou for being so funny
Making me laugh when everything looks down
You just joke and call me a bunny
You can always cheer me up

Thankyou for being so understanding
When I need to confess things
You are never one for blaming or condeming
You help to sort things out

Thankyou for being the best
My best friend as well as boyfriend
I’ve never come to love and trust
Anyone as much as I do you

Thankyou…



* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



© Copyright 2001 Jo - All Rights Reserved
HiddenSparklez
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since 2000-12-29
Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada
1 posted 2001-01-28 10:34 PM


Great poem! Funny how saying two words like "Thank You" can mean a thousand different things.  

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-01-28 11:43 PM


All those times you were down and all we needed to do was call you a bunny.....well folks, now we know how to cheer her up!!

Wonderful poem, quite sweet.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Baby G
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since 2001-01-28
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3 posted 2001-01-29 03:54 AM


Great poem, I'm glad you have someone as special as that, people like that you need to treasure!
Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 2001-01-29 05:01 PM


You know you and this Kris guy seem very happy!!  
Nice poem!!
xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??


sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
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5 posted 2001-01-29 09:03 PM


Aren't best friends the greatest?? Well I luv mine! Ur poem really rox! Keep up the awesome work!!

Luv Always,  
  ~*~P*R*I*S*C*I*L*L*A~*~
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How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it????



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jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
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State of Despair
6 posted 2001-01-29 09:19 PM


nice one bunny
a caring tribute to such a person
glad to see some people giving back to the people they love
nice work and I hope to read more

~JDR

"I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking."

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7 posted 2001-01-30 06:21 PM


bunny?  
I'm glad to see that you're both still going strong
And i'm glad to see happy poems this time  
thanks for sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



luvnkris
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since 2000-08-31
Posts 144
Perth, Australia
8 posted 2001-01-31 12:15 PM



Thanks guys for all your replys! i dont get a chance to come on the computer for a long period of time, but 2day i had a free day, so i tried to reply to a few other poems!
Anyways it means a lot to me that you took the time to read my poem! Thanks again!  
Luv Jo
xoxo


* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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