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You Saved Me
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lilpoet Member
since 2000-12-30
Posts 55Dallas,Tx |
You saved me when I was down You changed my entire life Turned my frown upside down You saved me when I was crying When I couldn't face the world When I felt like dying... I always leaned on you Everything you say is always true You saved me when I felt no hope Lost all faith and couldn't cope When lakes are caused by my tears I get scared & can't conqure my fears When there's so much going on And everything I'm doing is wrong My world is blurry and I cannot see But this time, where are you to save me? ~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here, but sad at the end considering he/she wasn't there at the moment. Hopefully he/she inevitably arrives.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You ahve discribed this person to be a really good one Just because he/she isn't around right now, he/she won't even the good are sometimes late you know  great share lil i love it I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey this is really good! sorry i missed it...sounds like sumthin id write  Keep up the great work!!*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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