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Morouxshi San
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0 posted 2001-01-14 04:14 PM


well ive come to the conclusion im evil, so who cares.

-=blah=-

retarded poetry,
inspirationally dead.
the broken stanzas.


i have more if you want them.    
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San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...




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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-01-14 04:20 PM


Hahahahahaha..........evil evil evil.
Hey your poetry isn't retarded *winks*
Don't say that about YOURSELF....hehe



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Angel in Flight
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2 posted 2001-01-14 04:29 PM


lol i am sorry i had to laught at your own comment hehhe keep up the .... "retarded" poerty.
Ina
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3 posted 2001-01-14 05:04 PM


did anybody ever tell u, that if u say dont read this they're gonna read it?
it was intersting
regina

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4 posted 2001-01-14 10:54 PM


LOL, you are evil...when you say "don't read this" you know people will, lol...interesting piece, keep on writing.  

*Krista Knutson*

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In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
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jeremydraul
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5 posted 2001-01-15 12:13 PM


nice reverse psychology..
i liked this one.. kinda funny.

~JDR

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6 posted 2001-01-16 03:47 PM


   YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it. lol, thanks for making me smile.
      ~Carly

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7 posted 2001-01-16 04:56 PM


just letting you know...i always do the oppisite of what im told

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Lakewalker
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8 posted 2001-01-17 04:29 PM


Well, I didn't read your post.  I just opened it up, clicked the reply button, and started typing.  Actually, I lied, I did read it, I found the poem amusing in a twisted little way, and are you sure you're evil?

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Morouxshi San
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9 posted 2001-01-17 04:34 PM


well lake, some people have found out.
others, well, havent.

its all a matter of perspective.  


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

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10 posted 2001-01-17 05:37 PM


Biting, sarcastic, it's like a poem about writer's block on acid....hehehe
Maybe you are evil....
Anyway, continue writing blah...
xoxo
Jenn


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