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Margie Daze
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Margie Daze Misty memories stirred within me Artistically painted pictures I see Rhyme is her gift her poetic boon Gloriously she portrays the moon Effortlessly she calls forth my soul To heal me and make me whole In her words I’ve bathed my eyes Never fails with a magic surprise Dances of delight her words bring Allowing the spirit to lift and sing Let this message be my small gift to you in my thanks of your help Hearing my plaintive pleading yelp Absolutely tireless has your work been Not resting a moment steadfast and unseen Keeping me on track supporting me You always the find the spark in me Out in the wide world there is fear Unaware am I not, but it’s not here Fortunately I came in Passions door Otherwise bereft I’d be evermore Rising through the pain I felt within Easy it wasn’t but you help me begin Vales of sorrow and rivers of my tears Everything seemed to worsen my fears Right there at the start you took my hand You called me to join Passions merry band Touched me with your tremendous heart Hearing my voice showed me where to start I can’t imagine my life without this place No I can it would be one endless race Girl thank you is all I had to say Margie girl all I ask is that you don’t ever go away Marsha [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-17-2001).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
i dont mean to reply out of Margie's absence, but just bump this back to the top so she may read it.. She seems to be such a wonderful person, from what I've read of hers.. she should read this... Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oops, I've Bev de Bump's permission.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very well done acrostic Marsha... and a wonderful sincere and sweet tribute to one of Passions held dearest poets great job on this ... Im sure she will adore it youre learning your lessons well, making your teachers proud take care jm As sure as God made wine you can't wrap your arms around a memory In the dark for me youre the candle flame that flickers to life ~Mission UK~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Marsha~ Just look at what you've done - this is BEAUTIFUL ... and your heart is sooooo big .... I love you, my friend ! Now you've gone and made me cry ... BUT, please know they are happy tears ! You're just wonderful and I'm so thankful for caring souls like you. You are a good friend - and don't worry ... I'm not going anywhere ! Just stay here plugging along in poetic junction ! HEY ... Poetic Junction ... I LIKE THAT ! Hey ... Only one wonky line ! And I'll bet you did that to make me feel needed ... ! *smile* gal ... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Marsha, this is so cool!!! I love how you did this. And it is Marge all over!  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
No one deserves a tribute more...and no one better to give it....good work, mushy |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Leave it to you girlie to write this beautiful poem to a wonderful lady |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great write Mushy and such a wonderful tribute...just soooo gooood!! I loved it...take care! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hi you all today I'm going for the brief but heartfelt thank you one and all. Margie girl deserve it, and even if I was to spend all my time turning out thank yous they still wouldn't cover my appreciation of her. Thank you everyone Take care love as always Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A beautiful tribute to an incredible lady... well done! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Marsha - this is simply outstanding - Marge's heart size you now rival = a super acrostic |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaBabe~ You fixed the 'WONKY' line ! ! ! You talented little gal you ! I just LOVE that word - WoNkY wOnKy WonkY Thanks to all of you for the nice comments. WE LOVE YA ' ! ! ~M&M~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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