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When the Bubble Bursts
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When the Bubble Bursts |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Though, you have power to rise Those rainbow dreams around your head Are clouding up your eyes You see through colored glasses Rose tinted is their hue You're much too open hearted To just take care of you Your love has been a bubble A transparent rainbow But soon you'll be in trouble If you can't learn to let it go Take some time to think Take some time to grieve For bubbles burst within the sink And pain does not relieve I know you'll soar on air As bubbles often do Until then you take care And you look after you My thoughts will fly to you You know you've won my heart When the bubble bursts and you are blue I'm here, as I was from the start I'm standing in the sidelines Waiting for you to see We won't be making headlines But I can love eternally So when the bubble bursts As it must surely do I'll comfort, bind up all your hurts Till you can again take care of you Your effervescent style Will see you rise again Until you see the golden mile You take care of you my friend Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This is very sweet and so easy to read and enjoy. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
nice, Kethry, wish this person well... "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Kethry I hope you don't mind but as I was reading this all I could see was the little guy from the alka-seltzer commercial. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a tribute of true friendship this is.....nicely done, Kethry  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Kethry... and very poignant. "I'm standing in the sidelines Waiting for you to see We won't be making headlines But I can love eternally" This reminds me of the song "You Saved the Best for Last" ... when someone realizes that their dream come true is the friend who's been there for them all along. *S* Well done! [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 02-19-2001).] |
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Dear Heart Junior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 23Dreamland, fifth cloud on the right |
Wonderful this is truly wonderful, you have such a beautiful gift. And your friendship is something that is a wonderful treasure Reach out and touch someone Holland Dozier and Holland |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
What sweet devotion you show here! I hope your friend realizes what a treasure you are. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keth, I know you meant this for someone else, but I could take so much of it to heart... well done little one... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
JLR, thank you so much for your lovely response, Kathleen, thanks, with you supporting me how could I ever go wrong *HuGS* my friend. inot2b, you made me smile, thanks. Deer, thanks for responding, you always will be one of my best friends at this site. suthern, if the poem reminded you of anything it has done its job. Thank you so much for responding *HuGS* Dear Heart, thank you for your comment. Yes I can be a good friend but I'm well supported by friends around me. kcsgrandma, thanks for stopping by I can't tell you how much I apprecriate your work and your coments, we share a wavelength. Sunshine, sister of my heart, the poem was written for whoever has ears to hear it. I'm so glad you got something out of it. Be well, you're swell Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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