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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX 
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You spoke to me I told you I was coming Coming to find you To meet you, to greet you, and to be with you My Knight Stepping off a plane into arms of a lover true There is the High priest Waiting in clothing of blue Royality in disguise Such sweetness my eyes have laid upon for the first time Standing, waiting, anticipating-- me I fall into those arms They carry me away to my very own Wonderland Looking into eyes of rich dark chocolate Filled with excitement, surprise, and hope I am enraptured--floating away With a voice so smooth As if it could melt butter Touches from your hands to my cheeks bring thoughts Thoughts of rubbing faces to the softest towels after a warm bubble bath Kisses that seem to last forever I have found you Found what I was looking for--for so long All of this is realized though the Jester of Heartache Who is a lot like me He reminds me that love is truth Love is fair Love hurts There is laughter shared We find ourselves in a neverending stream of tears You are everything that I need right now Still I find myself heading back home without you Love, Lady Thank you Modest Mouse and Jester of Heartache for showing me the best time of my life in California. I love you guys. Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ladycat, How sad to love and lose, yet still we have the memories. Good Write. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Kethry, I didn't love and lose. It is just love from a distance. Cali is along way away from TX and for right now I just have to deal with it. Thank you for reading it though.. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Ladycat, I am glad you enjoyed your stay here in California and this is a wonderful piece too. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Good poem, Ladycat....delighted in your new find, and that you had a blast. TTYL Alicat |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lady, this hits home for me, I left my love in California too, and I also did a poem about him of this same name. Interesting how cats can be similar, hm? Sweetly beautiful and heartfelt poem. Sandra/catalinamoon |
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