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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-02-13 06:18 AM


I Love Yu

Yu will it ever be
just me and you?
Can I kiss you?
May I hug you?
Will I ever do everything
I possibly can to love you?
You are the angel of my dreams.
You are the lake and river,
the trees and streams.
You are the mountain
I desire to climb.
You are the forest
I yearn to be mine.
You are my beautiful valentine.
I am thankful that God
made a woman such as you.
And I will tell you this Yu.
This guys in love with you.

JamesLee@February12,2001
forYuKangHo.
sheisMichelle
JagiyaNaSarangHa

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-02-13 06:26 AM


so sweet, she is every Yu(You) in your poem..making it twice as nice..*s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Celeste
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since 2000-11-11
Posts 597

2 posted 2001-02-13 08:29 AM


Completely beautiful!  

To capture and live a moment is truly living


Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton
3 posted 2001-02-13 10:52 AM


Sweet poem...wonderful write!

Nathan

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-02-14 04:55 AM


Thank you Wynter, dreamkeeper and Nate....James
Cerenity
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Posts 2637
Escondido-California
5 posted 2001-02-14 09:57 AM


Hi James,

How sweet, looks like the arrow made its mark, I am happy for you.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-02-14 04:10 PM


Thank you sweet angel Cerenity...James
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Twilight Zone
7 posted 2001-02-15 06:27 PM


very clever by using her name on the title....loved the read...thanks

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Jill
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since 2001-02-02
Posts 62
Louisiana
8 posted 2001-02-15 07:01 PM


Will I every do everything
I possibly can to love you.

You are well on your way with this poem.


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