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Beyond The Line Of Blue _____
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Beyond The Line Of Blue _____ The night has found me an oasis of you Refracted, the stars as they capture the blue Beyond the fine line, these eyes take in, view A trellis to heaven, to climb, troubles through. As spirits of nighttime reach down from their thrones My thoughts never waver, in moonlight, yet shone In visions they visit, overshadowing dark tones Filling my emptiness, with seeds you have sown. The white moon of splender, smiles down as it gleams Touches me softly, each ray, as it streams Enlightens and thrills, entices, too... schemes Left stricken with love thoughts you've held in my dreams. Beyond the fine line of blue, waiting still Lies a hidden oasis to capture my will. ~Wynter/Moonchild "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The night has found me an oasis of you Refracted, the stars as they capture the blue Beyond the fine line, these eyes take in, view A trellis to heaven, to climb, troubles through. As spirits of nighttime reach down from their thrones My thoughts never waver, in moonlight, yet shone In visions they visit, overshadowing dark tones Filling my emptiness, with seeds you have sown. ==================== Very wonderful images in this one for sure. Excellent penning as usual and I definitely like the reassurance of the KNOWING in this one. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ahhh Mark..I never really know...my TIMING has been off for years.....but hey..thanks for the nice words. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like this my friend...I do indeed.... |
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Sunlit Soul Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 37Never Land |
Incredible...the first verse has to be my favorite. What talent you have, I shall have to look for more of your lovely work!  "Every man dies. Not every man lives." -Tim Robbins |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Enjoyed the thoughts in this piece, I did. 'As spirits of nighttime reach down from their thrones My thoughts never waver, in moonlight, yet shone In visions they visit, overshadowing dark tones Filling my emptiness, with seeds you have sown.' Lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this is very lovely... has a wonderful flow with rich verbiage and imagery... the meter and rhythm are excellent.... very well done! (hold on to your will, though.... you don't want to end up like me, not having any choice in the matter.... LOL) nice job m |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sunshine..thank you, the words I read here provide me with enough nourishment to struggle through each day and to dream my nights...~S~ Sunlit Soul...very nice of you to say {{huggzz}} ~*Marge*~...sometimes my thoughts surprise me, when I reread later I don't believe it is I, who wrote this. ~Soft smiles Doreen...funny thing about "choice"...I had none...except 31 years ago....thank you for the warm words... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-12-2001).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
WhAt can I say that those before me haven't said - this is georgous! |
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zoe Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 34 |
am with all of the above on this, it is beautiful...really nicely written and expressed  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - I see lovely Moonchild come through in this writing. A'hhh, so tender, so romantic, as you ride that moonbeam. BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bill...thank you dear one {{Huggss}} thank you zoe, I am glad you stopped by to leave your prints... BC...yes you see that Moonchild is a very big part of me and always will be...  "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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