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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-02-12 04:24 PM

Whenever you question things
Or doubt the feelings true
Whenever the clouds cross your path
And color the feelings blue
Its like the whole world crashing in
Everything coming down on you
When you think that love has paled
Replaced by something new
When life seems to be so much
Dreams are impossible too

Think of how much I’ve been there
And how much we’ve been through
Time seemed to magnify the love
The faster time flew
Dream now of nothing but good things
And that I still love you

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-02-12 04:29 PM

Very pretty....

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-02-12 04:31 PM

And a lucky person it is on the receiving end of your love. Beautiful poem! Thanks.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-02-12 05:17 PM

I've known this, and wished to tell it many times. Nice work here!

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2001-02-12 05:34 PM

*sigh

Lovely..simply lovely.

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

5 posted 2001-02-12 05:40 PM

Thank you all for the inspiration.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-02-12 06:30 PM

still. . .

superb work on this one. . . it's wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

7 posted 2001-02-12 06:56 PM

A very, feel good piece.....I loved the rhyme cadence too....brilliant piece...take care!

Nathan

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2001-02-12 08:18 PM

this sounds to me like a beautiful song,

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-02-12 08:29 PM

This touches my heart so completly. I just love this.

-SEA

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