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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-02-10 02:09 PM



I wrote this humble poem for Marge, as she is a wonderful friend and inspiration.
Thank you Marge for your wonderful friendship.




Moccasins Trace

Within the cry of a wolf
Her voice will be heard
Her spirit wanders on moccasins
Leaves a trace of slightly prints
Which shows that she exist
Breeze of mystic reminisce

Inside her coat of natures bliss
Cascades moonlights kiss
The beauty hue of her entrance
Is guiding wolves dance
Within symphony of elders flight
By watchers of the sky

And in her visions of the night
She spreads the morning light
While dawn embrace her silky skin
Amiable love within
She is the spirit of the light
The elder of the night

And yet she hears the wolves cry
Supplications of wondering why
And her spirit whispers in the wind
Her moccasins leaves a vivid print
To touch your heart with her concerns
For love that wolves earns.


Charisma
~TMP~
09/02/01







[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 02-10-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-02-10 02:30 PM


A marvelous tribute, and the voice of you sings through as a meadowlark on the prairie's wind...

Well done Charisma...Marge will cry a tear of happiness to read this...

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2 posted 2001-02-10 02:36 PM


Absolutely wonderful!! You've captured the spirit perfectly.  
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Charisma~ This is WONDERFUL!! Marge is an angel..........so are you!!!!    SEA
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4 posted 2001-02-10 03:59 PM


Sunshine: thank you for your wonderful comment my friend, and I truly hope that Marge will like it a  little bit.

Poet deVine: Thank you for the wonderful, I am glad that you liked it.

Sea: I agree that Marge is a precious Angel and I am truly glad that you loved reading this one.....thank you for your wonderful reply my friend.

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5 posted 2001-02-10 04:33 PM


Charisma~
My goodness ... this is simply BEAUTIFUL !
What a loving spirit you are.
Yes, a tear and a smile in thanks for your beautiful thoughts.
Thank you for your thoughtfulness - always.
I love you, friend.
~*Marge*~

*See, I even like the color well enough to swipe it !
  


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6 posted 2001-02-10 05:23 PM


Very nice...James
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7 posted 2001-02-10 06:12 PM


Marge: Thank you for th beautiful, I am really glad that you liked it....and it was a pleasure to write this one....and I thank you for your warm friendship and inspiration ....and glad that you liked the color too my friend.

love you my dear friend.

James: thank you my friend for reading and your nice comment.



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8 posted 2001-02-12 09:44 AM


forgot to make a thread, as this one didn't showed up in my library.

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