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pixiechild
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since 2001-02-02
Posts 35


0 posted 2001-02-10 12:34 PM


What's the use anyway
of having a specific day,
dedicated espessially love,
suppose to create peace like a dove
buying gifts for the onces you care for
making them love you even more!

Relationships of so long
keeps on whishing it lasts forever on and on
feels like falling in love all over again
but why there is still so much to gain
love i think is blind,
so young, still alot to find

This specific day can have some meaning
cause knowing love is quite a feeling,
but feeling love for the first time...are some
others not knowing for years to come

Hope u have someone on valentines day
discovering a everlasting love that will never fade away


© Copyright 2001 Chantelle - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2001-02-10 12:46 PM


i don't know if there is such a thing but we can always dream, y'know? why not? life is short... i always thought hallmark made up the holiday to be honest.... but i never did very well helping them make money on it...i usually make my own cards or write a poem and sometimes there's nobody to give it to but

here's to LOVE!
here's to BLISS!
here's to HEARTFELT
HAPPINESS!

VALENTINE
I hope you hear
i need some LOVE
that day, all year!
CUPID please
send me
some HEART
LOVE that lasts
not torn apart.


(enjoyed your poem... thanks for the inspiration... hope you don't mind me posting a little response in verse to your post.. if you do, just say so, k?  


pixiechild
Junior Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 35

2 posted 2001-02-10 12:59 PM


ah thanks. i love the reply poem...cute.

i don't mind...everyone can be open minded

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