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Shared love |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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"Shared Love" My heart within You hold Your charm Makes me melt Each lasting word You speak Sends shivers Through my soul My body Twitches, quivers With desire To be close to you Your arms Wrapped around me We are as one Intertwined Breathing each others breath We breath as one Your body and soul Tempt me with forever A sacred love Shared together |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well done! I could feel the passion in this work....very open and direct yet full of passionate beauty....ethome Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Very nice, passionate read. I enjoyed this. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Very romantic. Love it. Poeminister |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh yes. . . this is excellent. . . really well done. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mote Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 31 |
Lovely piece. Enjoyed the read. Mote |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
*sigh* Beautiful and romantic, and makes me long for my soulmate. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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