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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-02-09 06:12 PM





It shant wilt or fold
Time will ever hold this rose
Gilded in soft gold





[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-10-2001).]

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Moon Dust
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1 posted 2001-02-09 06:15 PM


lovely images
Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-02-09 06:59 PM



Lovely!   You're really on a roll with these~

Take care,
Melissa~

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3 posted 2001-02-09 07:14 PM


Beautiful!!!  Romantically Victorian in nature.  
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like memories held in place.............   SEA
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5 posted 2001-02-09 11:22 PM


this is wonderful. . . I love the image that you used here as well. . .



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6 posted 2001-02-09 11:45 PM


Exquisitely said Poe...
I enjoyed the read...
~coco~

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7 posted 2001-02-10 12:19 PM


beautiful Poe...loved it..

                              ~V~



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Pablo Picasso


ATelamon
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8 posted 2001-02-10 12:43 PM


Well done senryu, well done indeed.

Enjoyed this, quick to the heart of the matter. Very nice.

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9 posted 2001-02-10 01:48 AM


Let loves tender touch
Gild the heart from whence this rose
Bloomed for us to see

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10 posted 2001-02-10 05:49 AM


beautiful......just beautiful, is these lovely treat.

((hugs))
Charisma

Daniel J D
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11 posted 2001-02-10 06:15 AM


Poeminister,
Very well put together. Fine work indeed.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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12 posted 2001-02-10 11:00 AM


PoeMinister~

Rose forged in golden
memories, forever held
in beauty from pen

~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2001-02-10 11:15 AM


I have a gilded rose... and you're right - It's never wilted... Lovely words, Poe..

Waft every crest upon your destined sea.
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity,
Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy
Refurl with sail for all eternity.

A Whisper's Caress
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14 posted 2001-02-10 12:02 PM


absolutely wonderful....

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

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