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Beyond the Moon
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Beyond the Moon |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beyond the Moon Virginia Salter someone stole my wide awake put it in a sugar cake tossed t’other side of moon where dish entertained spoon where streams of milk in chocolate seas sweetened up and tasted me where children laugh beyond the stars silhouettes are ice cream bars words and plants sing and dance golden apples play where dustmen roll on distant shores sunlight beams stream to the stars where mothers waltz with kings and knights and darkness fades into the night and you and I are one © August 10, 2000 |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Virginia... This is delightfully suited for Valentines Day, with everything a sweet tooth can sink into!! Loved it!! P.S.....I almost forgot to wish you "CONGRATULATIONS" on your 1,000th post.....  ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 02-08-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Delightful rhyme and imagery in this Virginia. Congrats on 1000!!! Poeminister |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, Sunnyone, twice! I didn't even notice it was my 1000th.  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Virginia, I enjoyed the progressive playfulness of your poem. Thank you. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VAS~ How playful ! Enjoyed. Congratulations on reaching the 1000th post milestone. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
VAS and this is 1000!!! WOW And I love your poem. I tried to put a fairy tale to each line, but........ Hugs, ME |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, again, ALL! So happy to share this one, cuz it tickles me. I love it when I can get playful with my poetry. It's akin to tickling my daughter under the chin when she was an infant up to being a toddler. Glad you have enjoyed this one! |
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