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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I feel it-- your breath in my ear... I feel you thought of crystal--clear... I hold you in my mind at night, and whisper prayers you'll be alright. I'm lonely--as the northern star. I'm only wanting where you are... my fingers drift, they trace the scars of shadow boxing--dreams of flight... and yesterday? She came. And went. Another tear of yester-- spent... You are release my good intent-- colors-tealed...within twilight. (Everything will be alright.) I hold my knees to rock the night... in my blindness, pray for light and never, setting sun's resent. Except? The sunlight that grows tall and loses me in shadows small... I wish I were not here at all boxing shadow of repent. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I know this is from your heart. . . it shows. . . wonderful serenity. . .  {hugs} --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gothkitty Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 32Australia |
Excellent emotion , very nice piece , the hearts true emotion is a beautiful thing gk |
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WhiteKnight Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 83NY |
This shows what is in your heart very well. Very nice poem. |
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Sunlit Soul Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 37Never Land |
This is extremely well written...filled with melancholy. I loved the flow, it was extremely unique. I'm impressed and will be looking for more of your work!  "Every man dies. Not every man lives." -Tim Robbins |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I feel it-- your breath in my ear... I feel you thought of crystal--clear... I hold you in my mind at night, and whisper prayers you'll be alright. I'm lonely--as the northern star. I'm only wanting where you are... my fingers drift, they trace the scars of shadow boxing--dreams of flight... and yesterday? She came. And went. Another tear of yester-- spent... You are release my good intent-- colors-tealed...within twilight. =================== would ya send me 1 vial of that rhyme divine..pleeeeze  yer such a beautiful moth ... ya know? and ya know me loves this poem too right? yeah ..you know ... very cool write me twin ... kiss yer muse for me  Tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I've found a love so strong The sun and the moon look on in jealousy ~VH~ |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
floats like a butterfly... stings... yeah.. it stings... nice serenity.. |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
Serenity, You continue to produce intuitive phrases that only a poet's poet ever sees. You find words like the muses uses. Pomes are made by fools like me, But you, my love, write poetry! Stan |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks Sven...I think you might KNOW me... Gothkitty...thanks for reading...Love your name...and Welcome..I hope to be catching up soon! WhiteKnight? Thanks and smiles...I needed a whiteknight about right now. Sunlit...thanks to you as well...will be looking for your work. Janet Marie...I owe you and half the internet world an e...here's a hug till then..thanks and love you! Local Reb? Don't make me come typing after you again!!!! Stan? just seeing your name lifted my spirits today...you know when I'm wallowing, don't you? HUGS, my dear one! Thanks to all and HUGS to forum. |
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