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Jill
Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 62
Louisiana

0 posted 2001-02-05 08:37 AM

If I touched you.....would your touch find its way to me?

If I looked into your eyes.....would you see me?

If I offered you a star filled sky.....would you fly with me?

If I put my arms around you.....would you hold me tight?

If I asked you to stay with me.....would you lie down beside me?

If I lay my head across your chest.....would your heart beat only for me?

I I told you I loved you.....would you love me too?

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

1 posted 2001-02-05 08:47 AM

Delicate and full of gentle hope. Nice one!

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Jill
Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 62
Louisiana

2 posted 2001-02-05 08:53 AM

Dreamkeeper - Thanks much. Appreciate you stopping by.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2001-02-05 10:06 AM

Jill...I hope his answer is yes

~ Ruth
www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html

USBZoso
Junior Member

since 2001-02-05

Posts 20

4 posted 2001-02-05 10:08 AM

i think you should find somebody else... too much pain... small reward

Jill
Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 62
Louisiana

5 posted 2001-02-05 10:17 AM

Hoot Owl - Thanks for the read....I hope so too.

USBZoso.....What an honest response. Thanks.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2001-02-05 10:38 AM

Jill~

the simple longing and fragile hope
in this takes the breath away. beautiful
in every sense. i'm truly looking forward
to reading more from you!

take care
~amy~

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-02-05 10:44 AM

Into the library this goes, what a honest, gentle plea! I think that deep down inside, we all want that pure truest of love. You expressed yourself well

Take care,
Melissa~

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

8 posted 2001-02-05 07:50 PM

Can I steal this? haha

Jill
Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 62
Louisiana

9 posted 2001-02-06 08:32 AM

Amy, Melissa, JLR - Thank you for taking time to read and reply so kindly.

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