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Open Poetry #12

Senryu

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

0 posted 2001-02-04 09:25 PM

Within the shadows
of the depths of my heart
will always be you

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2001-02-04 09:26 PM

So few words and so much to say. Wonderful.
ME

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-02-04 09:31 PM

Hi! How are you dreamkeeper! Great senyru. Super to see you here, especially today.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2001-02-04 09:40 PM

Wonderful senyru......I know that feeling well and in the shadows of my heart are some very deep footprints.

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

4 posted 2001-02-05 01:01 AM

Beautiful senryu, one I wish I had written.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-02-05 01:11 AM

Oh wow, now I deeply relate to this. Extremely well expressed!

Take care,
Melissa~

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-02-05 01:29 AM

Lovely Senryu. Nicely penned.

Poeminister

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

7 posted 2001-02-05 07:14 AM

Thanks everyone! Appriciate your comments!

To capture and live a moment is truly living

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

8 posted 2001-02-05 12:18 PM

wish I could write so much in so little, this is beautiful

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