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Sven
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0 posted 2001-02-04 08:06 PM


lovelight
candlelight
watch o'er my love this night
in thy flame her face I see
eyes of blue peering back at me
watch o'er my love this night
candlelight
lovelight

lovelight
starlight
shine brightly through this night
through the light of this one star
I can be love where you are
shine brightly through this night
starlight
lovelight

lovelight
moonlight
guide my love through this night
lead her heart across this land
as if its held in my hand
guide my love through this night
moonlight
lovelight

lovelight
sunlight
rise for us, ending night
in the warmth of thy bright rays
keep us in love all our days
rise for us, ending night
sunlight
lovelight

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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1 posted 2001-02-04 08:24 PM


Sven...this is so beautiful...the two lines I like best are...
I can be love where you are  &
lead her heart across this land

   this leaves me breathless......helen

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2 posted 2001-02-04 09:01 PM


Beautifully said, Sven.  I loved it.     Great job, my friend

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


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3 posted 2001-02-04 09:51 PM


Love this!   Its great to see you writing.


"This above all-ask yourself in the stillest hour of your night:MUST I write? Delve into yourself for a deep answer.

Rainer Maria Rilke
from "Le

Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-02-04 09:52 PM


Yes!

Aimster
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5 posted 2001-02-05 11:18 AM


sven~

as always your work moves me. just
brilliant and beautiful, this is! love
your work...i do. awesome!

take care
~amy~


"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."


Sven
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6 posted 2001-02-05 07:31 PM


helen, thank you so much. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed. . .

DE, thank you. . . nice to hear from you again. . .  

Temptress, it's great to see you responding. . .  

Sunshine, thank you!!!

Amy my friend, thank you. . . you've always been one of my biggest supporters. . . I appreciate it. . . glad that you enjoyed. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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