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Open Poetry #12

Reflections

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

0 posted 2001-02-04 03:29 PM

I stare at my reflection
seeing in my mind
A million reflections
Moments captured

Laughter, love
Tears and heartache

Those who have loved me and
Those who tried to
All the women I tried to be
for that love

And now,
Finally,
Those reflections are a part of me
but only as part of my depth
Slideshow memories

And this woman looking back at me
is Me

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-02-04 03:39 PM

"slideshow memories"....

what a line!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2001-02-04 04:16 PM

Introspective, my friend. Very thought provoking. Well stated - written. Enjoyed mucho!

jwesley

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-02-04 09:51 PM

Hey, dream..., I too like the same line as Sunshine.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2001-02-04 09:59 PM

'All the women I tried to be
for that love'

Great write, dreamkeeper...something to keep in mind.

sp

...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea,
oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-02-05 07:27 PM

there comes a time where we have to see ourselves. . .

this is your time. . .

wonderful. . .

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