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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Linger how you linger long after your gone seeping in me surrounding pressed safely in my mind between my heart bringing color to this blank canvas in song [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 02-04-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful. Nicely said. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Beautiful Rhythem Helen. Well conceived. Rich |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
beautiful, I liked it! AP |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
Brings soft images to mind....loved this. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Linger how you linger long after your gone seeping in me surrounding pressed safely in my mind between my heart bringing color to this blank canvas in song" -------------------- Oh, I read this more than once! I've been reading and reading and with this one, I feel a sensuousness (is that a word) thank you! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Oh I like this one helen. . . it's wonderful. . . a memory. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Helen, this is so delicate yet strong - so peacefully poignant... Love it immensely! Lary |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ty all...........helen |
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