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Betrayed
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Betrayed |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Betrayed how dare you write my life in your words as if you knew as if you could see straight to my soul where are you hiding how could you know so many unlimited details some that are right on target some so far off the mark how can you pretend to know me so well so much like me so much unlike me at all sharing my secrets stroking my dreams painting my horrors exposing such nakedness all without thought of any consequence that comes in sharing information's truths and untruths |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes helen, we never see ourselves as well as others see us. . . excellent. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
The nerve of some people, huh? Enjoyed this. jwesley |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
damn!!!!! sorry, but that was way too real. nothing like being misunderstood to piss ya off....huh? spec, by someone who claims to know you. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
How dare they do that!! How rude!!!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Sometimes we see ourselves in things that weren't even meant for us. Such an easy thing to relate to what someone writes. Well Done Rich |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Slick_, Response piece coming back at ya in a coupel of minutes . . . Kraw' |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i'm waiting babe |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Go to 'Dark' |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ty all.....it hurts to trust & be betrayed....helen |
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