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Remember About When
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Remember About When |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“ “REMEMBER ABOUT WHEN”” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I remember about when, like the first time we met, an experience to behold, one I’ll never forget… When I looked at your face, it shone with loves caring, and I thought about your tenderness, so very appealing… But I sensed a touch, of sadness in your eyes, perhaps a time that had passed, and saying too many goodbyes… You keep it inside, something held within, I asked you to share it, as surely it’s not a sin… You never did tell me, what was wrong, and now my heart, sings its own sad song… But love you I do, my feelings are no lessor, for my emotions still take, their own little detour… So now I’m deep, within my own thought, trying to occupy your desires, because mine are caught… But I really don’t know, it can’t be just my pen, for all I do is, “Remember About When”… ~~~~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*sigh* Sometimes, a sigh is enough for a reply don't you think? This is wonderful Bill. *sigh* |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Through life's journey, remembering about when is all we have. Nicely done. Enjoyed your writing. Ariana |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
So now I’m deep, within my own thought, trying to occupy your desires, because mine are caught… But I really don’t know, it can’t be just my pen, for all I do is, “Remember About When”… ~~~~ I am in a ~Sighing mood tonight.. sighh sighh sighhhhhh ~S~ ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Remembering "when"... brings back some pretty special times, doesn't it? Reminiscing is special indeed... Lovely words, BCI...  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This poem is a wistful beauty. *S* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Evening Bill. . . I'm with Poet deVine. . . I believe that a *sigh* will do nicely here. . . -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
BC, Sad one here my friend. Sometimes all we can do is remember. Lovely thoughts.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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StumperDaBumper Junior Member
since 2000-12-20
Posts 19State of Mind, Compassion USA |
Bumpintine Bumpintine Won't a bump be mighty fine Another trip around the forum cause I think it's awful boring without a little bump or two Here's one from me just for you! Happy Bumpintine! Are we having fun yet? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this morning you once again..have me caught ...had to reread and respond and again am captured between the last line....and remembering when *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill... To some of us, memories are all that is left, so we cherish them, but wish they could have just been a little more....  ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Poet deVine - I do accept a sigh, as one sigh says more than one thousand words. Thank you Poet deVine. Ariana - Your thoughts say a lot, and I do thank you. nakdthoughts - one sigh from your heart is all that is needed for a reply. Thank you. Nan - to remember does bring back some really special times. Thanks Nancy. suthern - thank you for your reply, and a wistful beauty it may be. Sven - this poem is a sigh, and I thank you Sven, and everyone that enjoyed it. Lone Wolf - A'hh yes, sad indeed, when all we can do is remember. StumperDaBumper - I do thank you Bumper, for that trip. nakdthoughts - well, just think about it. Caught....but when? Sunny - memories, memories to be cherished, but somehow they never last to not become just a memory. |
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