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Alan
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0 posted 2001-02-02 08:44 PM



Would you be my Valentine
I promise with you to spend my time
But
I won’t buy you  no roses
Cause you’ll just kill’em
And throw’em away

Candy
Ain’t no way
You just eat it all
And make yo self wider
Than you is tall

A card
That be jest a waste
Of Paper
I’ll put be mine
Upon my chest
Jest
Fer you

A nightie
Now that is naughty
But tell me
Why should I buy you a nightie
Fer yo to wear fer 5 minutes
Then have you put it
In a drawer and forget it

As fer that feller
Cupid
Yes.. the one that runs around
In a diaper and acting stupid
If he points that bow at me
I’ll stick that arrow
Where it shouldn’t be

© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-02-02 09:05 PM


My, my, such a romantic!!  Cute though and so like a MAN.  Hugs any way,  ME
Paula Finn
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2 posted 2001-02-03 02:51 AM


LMAO...yeah well I aint buying you no beer neither so there   I like this Alan hehehe
2dalimit
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3 posted 2001-02-03 08:14 AM


Hum! Very logical. But, it don't work that way around here.
Melton

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4 posted 2001-02-03 08:27 AM


LOL at you Alan....um, I think I'll step aside, 'cause after this, I'm sure there's going to be a stampede....

dgvarner
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5 posted 2001-02-03 09:26 AM


ME...ME!!  PICK ME!!  teehee...  

this is a cute one...very humorous...  

hugs, g


"i know its kinda late
i hope i didnt wake you
but theres somethin i just gotta say--
i knew you'd understand..."
jcroce

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6 posted 2001-02-03 09:40 AM


oh my....you sound like my hubbie....he want to spend all his time with me....but don't like to buy or do all that stuff.....as he believe that you can't buy real love.....

love the read

Charisma


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7 posted 2001-02-03 11:24 AM


This is too funny!  I LOVE it.
HopeS
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8 posted 2001-02-03 01:00 PM


cute one Alan !!
makes a fun change from all
the mushy stuff
Hope

HopeS
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9 posted 2001-02-03 01:09 PM


Alan this was cute and fun !!!
A nice change from the usual mushy stuff !
Hope

Alan
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10 posted 2001-02-03 10:13 PM


I want to thank eveyone for taking the time to read and comment
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