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CD
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0 posted 2001-01-31 03:51 PM


Pen touches paper
Ink paints over the white
Thoughts materialize
Words write.

Water, wind
Earth and fire
Feelings inside
Dearth of words.

Pen stops for
Just a while
Them comes back
And paints The Word:

YOU

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-01-31 04:43 PM


CD~
A wonderfully warm thought.
Nicely said.
~*Marge*~



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2 posted 2001-01-31 05:19 PM


I see that your words can mean so much also.

Love this one...



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3 posted 2001-01-31 05:21 PM


I love the direction this headed, and the ending is perfect...nice work  
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4 posted 2001-01-31 07:10 PM


Love this...



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5 posted 2001-02-23 10:00 AM


really liked the thought in this one CD

sometimes the "YOU" that you see from where you sit..is the most beautiful piece of artwork...

good one

hugs, g


there is no BEST in a world of INDIVIDUALS...

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