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RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 2001-01-29 10:52 AM

Tides

Life in the pools left
from waters receding
hopes not in present confines
with limitations bordered
in sand….
nor believes on
rumors told
from ignorance taught….
but trusts from promises
of fleeing tides' past

Robert

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-01-29 12:23 PM

Robert,
I like this,particularly "but trusts from promises of fleeing tides past."
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

2 posted 2001-01-29 01:52 PM

Wonderful depth. I truly loved. Excellent!

To capture and live a moment is truly living

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

3 posted 2001-01-29 02:26 PM

Oh thank you for reading and I will "write on" kethry!!

dreamkeeper you keep on dreaming!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2001-01-30 10:39 PM

Beautiful, RobertB, soon to be Robert without an initial!!!

Lovely expression, Robert!!

Denise

laryalee
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 352
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2001-01-30 10:51 PM

Robert, in such a concise way you have captured (like the tide pool) the drift of an entire ocean! It's wonderful!
Lary

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-01-30 11:28 PM

excellent write......

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-01-30 11:46 PM

I am so enjoying your poetry!...

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

8 posted 2001-02-01 03:16 PM

I really enjoy all of your comments.

It is so difficult to know the slant of my own poetry.

Robert

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