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Commonalities.........................[Sonnet III]
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Commonalities.........................[Sonnet III] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Commonalities [Sonnet III] wayward, skyward be, the common mass, the lad and lass populace seen with little, but yea, extremes do clash but of this, the general public, be I but one of they and know the proletariat indeed shall have his say for great counsel, this, the working class can give for, most often asked, is how to live, and let live? plebians, these citizenry might oh so very well be… but there be music in grassy root….if you could but see… they walk a gentle sphere, these multitudes that so roam they know well then, where there is hearth, and home and they close their rank and file, to care for one on one and they only hope tomorrow, yet again brings the sun these people, this humanity, this, the working classes oft then look in mirrored glass of their many masses 01.29.01 |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I love this, Sunshine! Beautiful poem, beautiful words, beautiful flow.... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Perfect. I love the way you pen these. Poeminister |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Elizabeth, Poeminister....thank you both so much for reading.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed they do. . . I'm reminded of cummings when I see the title Sunshine. . . have you ever read him??? ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Sven...yes, I have, but not in a long, long time...I will refresh myself soon... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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