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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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0 posted 2001-01-29 12:07 PM


Do you know that dreams are secret wishes?
And I have dreamed tonight of only you
I dreamed we walked through roses in a garden
The blossoms still bejeweled with morning dew

My dreams tonight have been of love and beauty
The beauty I see in your shining eyes
The love I always feel when we're together
Walking under cloudless, moonlit skies

I dreamed a dream tonight of you beside me
Laying in my arms within the night
No evil visions marred our peaceful slumber
We lay there fast asleep until the morning brought her light

Do you know that dreams are secret wishes?
My dreams tonight and always are of you
Sometimes dreams are foolish, false desires
Sometimes dreams and wishes do come true


Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

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VAS
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1 posted 2001-01-29 12:55 PM


Lovely dreams.  Uh...that saying does count where nightmares are concerned, does it?;o}
kcsgrandma
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2 posted 2001-01-29 01:02 AM


Seems to me these wishes are too lovely to be kept secret.  I say make it so!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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3 posted 2001-01-30 03:31 AM


Thank you VAS & kcsgrandma for your responses. Yes, they are lovely dreams indeed. I am sure we have all enjoyed similar dreams from time to time. If only they would come true. Perhaps one day...
And yes, VAS, that does count for nightmares too.


Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-02-01 01:43 AM


*Sigh*
This is a most lovely piece.
And ... often dreams do come true ...
keep dreaming them ....
~*Marge*~


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Nate Dogg
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5 posted 2001-02-01 03:14 AM


This is a beautiful and lovely write, Ian...brilliant work!

Nathan

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6 posted 2001-02-01 03:17 AM


"Sometimes dreams and wishes do come true"


Yes, they do.......beautiful poem   -SEA

Mike
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7 posted 2001-02-11 12:30 PM


Very nicely written.  enjoyed.
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