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Telling You---PDV's Valentine Challenge
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Telling You---PDV's Valentine Challenge |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Its only been you From the very first moment But who can I tell? Heart and minds collide And I'm hopelessly in love But how can I say? Moments that we share Tender teasing loving times But can it be more? You captured my heart Please don't ever set it free When the courage comes To say to your heart All the love I have hidden Away from the world But the time is right To share how I feel for you To tell you I care I whisper softly From this womans heart to yours I'm in love with you |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very romantic render Paula. I like the heart outpouring it makes for such great poetry and this is no exception, it's very well done indeed!! ethome Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
don't know about the challenge yet....but I do know that I loved these wonderful write....oh my.....I really love it. ((hugs))) Charisma |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm ready for Valentine's Day, Paula!!! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hoping that it's heard Paula. . . this is excellent. . . straight from the heart. . . wonderful. . .  --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ethome...its nice seeing your name here again friend...Im glad you like this...was an interesting challenge Charisma...its been fun writing to this challenge...thank you Kathleen...LOL well me too...if he realizes who he is that is...hehehe Sven...well I answered PdV's challenge...now its up to him to see and respond...now isnt it? |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
I was waiting for this to slip back so i could triumphantly produce it like a conjurer producing a rabbit. I'm using the Bev de Bump and saving Mushy for later, aren't I just so sneaky? Noooo of course I'm not I'm telling everyone, Beverley is Mushy, anyway I'm sure they all know. If they want to know that is. As for this dear heart it is utterly utterly divine, and why hasn't anyone sent me a valentine? I know it's not till Wednesday! Question do all the me's get a valentine? No probably not! Oh well back to the drawing board. Did I tell you this was beautiful and written as only you know how, perfect dear heart, and if I did I've told you twice and if I didn't then I have. Love it but you guessed that I know Take care love as always Mushy  Puck And while thy willing soul transpires At every pore with instant fire Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 [This message has been edited by Beverley (edited 02-10-2001).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
My twin..... Your partner is a very lucky person to have found your tender heart! This is beautiful, and you sound very happy!!  ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Its only been you From the very first moment But who can I tell? Heart and minds collide And I'm hopelessly in love But how can I say?' Beautiful write, Paula! I really enjoyed this one! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Extremely tender and deeply heartfelt poem. Very well done Paula!! Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Such love I hope is returned to you. Enjoyed this so much. |
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