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Enough !!!
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Enough !!! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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ENOUGH !!! there is a rage out on the sea intense violent anger has been set free aware of what has caused the storm set in motion when cold met warm the tempest now has called revenge wrath in all natures avenge anger from a mortal sin ripping pain upon my skin I am but a tiny vessel understanding well why we wrestle I stare now in the eyes of death you can not take my breath ENOUGH !!! |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
This is very deep and shows pain, but also shows you have strength! Hugs, ME |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Slick calm can counter the most intence rage. Very nice flow here Rich |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ME.....yes I am strong...thank you for reading...hugs back Rich......at times even calm can not quiet a storm ......you just have to let it rage & duck....lol helen |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I, too, like the flow here, and the especially metaphoric lilt throughout. Well stated. jwesley |
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