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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Once Once our love so sweetly blossomed. It’s delicate warmth so soothing. Our hearts, minds, and souls fused, Once anything seemed possible. Our own reality of hope and joy, A future by each other’s side. Now as I’m lost in a sea of tears. I wonder why we had to end. The happiness and warmth once felt, Now replaced by fear and loneliness. How can I live without your gentle love? I mournfully cry trying to figure out How to exist with half a heart, a soul. And even now that you are gone I know that I can say that I was loved Once. < !signature--> This is just a quick note letting all of you know that I will be able to use a computer once a week.. I know it isnt much.. but at least I get to stop in and read the beautiful poetry .. and post some of my own. I will try to reply the best I can... but unfortunately I won't have much time. I hope to get my computer fixed soon. [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 01-27-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ Lovely thoughts ~ 'I know that I can say that I was loved Once.' And in the memory-keeping ~ it will have been more than enough ~ *We enjoy seeing you here and hope you get that computer fixed real soon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marge - Thank you for stopping in. I hope I get my computer fixed soon as well. I reallyyy miss all of you and you wonderful poems. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey you..  we will take you when ever we can get you  so nice to see you here today. well expressed poem of love's memories and the way we must try to heal with out regret. tho sweetly sad.. tis well done take care jm "she calls me baby ... she calls everybody baaaaby". ~jc mellencamp~ ;) |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
A very sad time when one loses half their world...you have written about it very good...beautiful poem |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hey  i hear music to this one. hehehe wanna duet hun? very very very good work and you know i feel your pain all to well. you have seen that first hand. *hugs* you need a hand to help you mine is there. *holds it out for her* talk to you soon love ya jesse True beauty is often hidden in darkness... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Janet - It is good to be back... even if it is only once a week. I'm glad you liked the poem... it wasn't an easy one to write. But, as always, the therapy it offered helped greatly. Alan - Thanks for stopping in. I'm not quite sure if I lost it or not.. I'm hoping not. I guess time will tell though. Jesse - Hugssss to you my friend. You know I will take that hand anytime I need it.. and offer my hand back to you in an instant. I would love to do a duet with you one day.. but remember... I CAN'T RHYME! lol. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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