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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2001-01-27 01:11 PM


Have Faith


Things will get better.
That’s what I used to tell myself,
Back in school when kids would point.
Laughing at my hair, height, and size
Have faith, things will get better.

Things will get better
Echoed through my aching mind
When I awoke from taking those pills
Heartbroken I was still here in this world.
Have faith, things will get better.

Things will get better
I whispered the day my beloved gramma passed
Thinking she was the only one who understood
Feeling so alone, so breathless with sorrow
Have faith, things will get better.

Things will get better.
I softly cry into the night,
Shaking as nightmares of my past haunt me.
Tormenting memories never letting me forget.
Have faith, things will get better.

Things will get better.
I weep, my heart shattered and broken.
I struggle to let him go
And forget the love that burns in my heart
Have faith, things will get better.

Things will get better.
I hope as things spin out of control.
Homelessness draws closer as I slowly get lost.
Watching my life slip though my grasping fingers
Have faith, things will get better.

Things will get better.
I think with a short dry laugh.
Wondering why I’ve gripped so tight
To those simple yet seemingly untrue words….
Have faith, things will get better.


© Copyright 2001 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
CocoBaci
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1 posted 2001-01-27 01:16 PM


Oh my RosePetals, this one made me cry...
A very emotional read and I must compliment you for the exceptional writing you have displayed here...
Hugs2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

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2 posted 2001-01-27 01:41 PM


faith will always be there my friend. . . so nice to see your name back here. . . but so sad to see it with writing like this. . .

hugs to you. . .  

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inot2B
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3 posted 2001-01-27 01:46 PM


Your title says it all, "Have Faith".
You have written what a lot of people feel. And all I can say is "Have Faith".   Hopefully "things will get better".

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-01-27 03:21 PM


yes, they will.  Thank you for this. I needed it and I'm certain many others did also!

Kathleen



Jesse Jaymz
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5 posted 2001-01-30 03:40 AM


tara
*hugs and kisses*  my dear firend when i was at your house and you gave me this i cried a silant tear for you.  i love this one hun.  great work from a greater person.  *huggles to you*  see you soon.
love ya
jesse


True beauty is often hidden in darkness...

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-01-30 04:45 AM


I know when things get tough we have to go on because there is no other choice...we can always hope and pray for a better life...and I believe we all have our share of ups and downs....James
Kethry
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7 posted 2001-01-30 05:31 AM


rosepetals25,
Such a sad write. Things will get better because they must! *HuGS*
write on, pain's song
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



rosepetals25
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8 posted 2001-02-03 10:31 AM


Thank you all for nice words.  I am trying to hold on to those words..."Have faith, things will get better.."  but as you all know, that it can be very trying.  I am hanging in there... by a thread... lol.. but I'm not down for the count yet  .  Thank you all again.. I'm glad you all liked the poem.

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

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