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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2001-01-26 04:13 PM

When love gets shook up
and things don't look up,
you better brace up to the part
Cause all that you know
about how love goes
comes straight out of the heart.

And the blues those lonely love lost blues
oh, they can make the day grow long
when you got a heart that's got no home
and you're left out all alone.
Outside the love you always knew.

And love such deep and daring love
will drive a normal man insane
when every day is dark with pain
seems there's no sunshine only rain
While I'm still in love with you.

And I feel so bad
and I feel so sad
Oh lord what can I do
While I'm still in love with you.

And nights those lonely silent nights
they come to say you're gone
don't know how I can carry on
I can't find out what went wrong
Cause I'm still in love with you.

And I feel so bad
and I feel so sad
Oh Lord what can I do
While I'm still in love with you.

And life yeah this only lonely life
is full of sorrow and pain
when a heart gets rearranged
and the blues they come so strange
Cause I'm still in love with you.

Mercy what can a lonely man do
in a big mess with the blues
Yeah and I'm still in love with you.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-01-26 04:20 PM

That's the reason the songs of the blues will never die. Wonderful write sir. I am glad to see you back in here with another of your wonderful works to feast my eyes on.

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2001-01-26 04:22 PM

Eric--You sure know how to sing the blues..each note touched my heart....still, I'm glad to see you posting again..your poetry is wonderful!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-01-26 04:26 PM

Your wrist must be better, because strumming the blues like this is never easy when 100%! This is wonderful! What a song...I could hear that bluesy feel all over these blue pages....

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2001-01-26 04:33 PM

My heart provided a great melody for these ever-so-true lyrics... This one needs a whiskey chaser. *S* Wonderful!!!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2001-01-26 04:40 PM

P T love, this is truly why you are such a brilliant writer, here is all a blues song should be. Utterly utterly wonderful piece from you love. Absolutely excellant work
Really superb
Take care love
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-01-26 06:38 PM

ethome--
I like this blue love melody. Wonderfully penned

Its good to read you again!

take care,
Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2001-01-26 07:03 PM

What a great song
Have you ever written lyrics?
Well, you just did
Well done
Liz

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-01-26 07:05 PM

ETHome~
You've got it happening with this song in blue~

'Mercy what can a lonely man do
in a big mess with the blues
Yeah and I'm still in love with you.'

He picks up his pen and writes it !
You did it !
This is really a likable song-sung-blue !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2001-01-26 11:25 PM

And the blues those lonely love lost blues
oh, they can make the day grow long
when you got a heart that's got no home
and you're left out all alone.
Outside the love you always knew.

And love such deep and daring love
will drive a normal man insane
when every day is dark with pain
seems there's no sunshine only rain
While I'm still in love with you.

==================

Oh my E-babes got the blues ...
hes feeling low ... got nothing to lose
his heart wont let him be ... wont let him choose
hes paying love's price ... hes paying his dues
got him feeling like leaving ... strapin on his walking shoes
Sing em to me baby...sing those Ethome blues
music to our ears ... the melodies of your muse

MISSED YOU POET PAL!!!!
love ya
JM

"she calls me baby ...
she calls everybody baaaaby".
~jc mellencamp~ ;)

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

10 posted 2001-01-27 12:58 PM

I have missed you sweet poet man...and missed writing sung like this...hugs and a jillion kisses

We all have wings...some of us don't know why

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2001-01-27 08:00 AM

Thank you Mark...good to be back and as always good to hear from you.

Thank you Martie I love the blues so I tend to write them quite often...thanks again!

Karilea it's always so good to get feedback from you...thanks so much!

Hey Suthern! Pour me a chaser too will ya.. thanks for the comments.

Thank you so much for the kind words Mushy I appreciate your upbuilding comments...keep your chin up and keep out of the flood waters....ethome

Thanks poeminister for the kind thoughts and taking the time to drop in on a fellow Canuck.

Thanks Elizabeth! I have been writing blues lyrics for so many years....ethome

Marge so good to hear from you! LIke you I pick up the pen and write it I can't help myself......ethome

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2001-01-27 12:53 PM

You cry, you grieve, you get angry, you accept it, you get over it...not necessarily in that order...sometimes it takes three months..sometimes three years...I feel for you...disappointments sadden our spirits...we all want a love that stays...that accepts us...James

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

13 posted 2001-01-27 01:05 PM

Ethome, you make writing lyrics look and sound so easy...

I enjoyed this PoetFriend, thank you...

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

14 posted 2001-01-27 02:00 PM

ethome, great song... I often wonder if you put music to them, are you also a musician out there.. keep them coming.

Parker

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

15 posted 2001-01-28 09:40 AM

Thank you so much my inspiration JM I thnk your comment was so VANtastic always a treat to hear from you etVANhome

Thanks Paula for the sweet poet man comment you are such a kind person.....ethome

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

16 posted 2001-01-28 09:50 AM

ethome, love these blues song....heartfelt penned my friend....

((hugs))
Charisma

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

17 posted 2001-01-28 10:21 AM

Great Blues
Read this a the day u posted,
It was great when i read it then,
Still feel the same way...
Would really like to see this put with the music also....

Bernie

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

18 posted 2001-01-28 03:22 PM

Set this to music -
I'll buy the cd - Promise~S~

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

19 posted 2001-01-28 07:29 PM

ah the blues....gotta love 'em..

this is a great one ethome

hugs, g

"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to the point where we would think so..."

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

20 posted 2001-01-28 07:50 PM

this IS a song...how do you stop love?

Kathleen

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

21 posted 2001-01-29 07:06 AM

Thank you James fot the truly spoken words, much appreciated!

Coco..thanks for the comment on the lyrics I love writing them!

Parker..well kind of...I played in a band years ago..I usually have someone else write the melody for me now days...thank you for the comment...ethome

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

22 posted 2001-01-30 09:06 AM

Thank you Charisma for taking the time to read and comment

Thanks Bslicker for your input into the blues ....glad you liked it.

Bill I wish I had a completed CD for sale it would be so nice...... thanks for the kind words.......ethome

Thank you Dgvarner for the blues comment so much appreciated

Kathleen thanks for the song comment ...glad you could hear it.

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