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The curse
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The curse |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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The curse this is my decree for every tear you made me cry you shall now cry three till there is land no more just a raging sea for every puncture in my heart how you have made it yes, done your part finely tuned every cut pencil drawn in graphic art now in pain you feel appeal pretend to love it's fear you conceal you wishing, wishing love could be real listen well to my verse there is a message it is a curse tears, pain, and emptiness from this day on will be reversed |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great display of your ventilations, slickone....enjoyed the write cause, it displays the characteristic of how a poem should interpet...peace! Nathan |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Slick very sharp poem, Like a knife. Rich |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - yes, you do write how you feel, and express it very well. Wish you the best. BC |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
powerful words. . . well done. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
by powers of the three times three all that you send returns to thee by High priestess is decreed by NINES live I--so mote it be... aw...you never mentioned we were sisters of the cloth....would love to chat sometime... well done! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
thank you all for stopping & reading.....and thats right .....don't get the lady mad........i dont anger easily.....but if I'm mad & you see tears ....you better back up. LOL helen |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I see vision of the movie the Color Purple, have you ever seen that movie. Maybe the curse will be real. Love this poem. |
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