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a_little_girl
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0 posted 2001-01-25 10:12 PM


As I look into your eyes,
and you into mine.
I feel something different,
something sweet and divine.

A star is your face,
so beautiful, no wonder,
its for you I put in my heart,
the heart is the right place.

I wish you would come to me,
I wish you would stay,
but I know somehow,
that you'll be back some day.

I hope that you'll be alright,
I hope that you'll be okay,
and that you know that I love you,
more every day.


**No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.**
~a_little_girl



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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2001-01-25 10:30 PM


And are we supposed to guess? Or wait til he replies.....very well done!!!    
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-02-07 04:25 PM


Oops, needs a boost back up for holiday reasons....

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3 posted 2001-02-07 06:59 PM


I would say that we're supposed to wait. . . and so we will. . .  

this is wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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