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Wilfred Yeats
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0 posted 2001-01-25 01:57 PM



He'd come home that day in bitter rage
Driving up the sloping drive
Wheels squealing as he stopped.
Slamming doors so did he strive.

In the room he saw her standing
Her anger matching his
His vision blurred by rage, hers too
His thoughts of love were in a quiz.

Approaching now, fingers curling
She, feeling "What to throw?"
Shouting now "Why'd you do it?"
Shouting back "Why'd you know?"

Now she saw the tie she'd bought him.
The scent of Onions, He smelled now,
Food she only made for him
Hit his anger made him cow

Looks exchanged, anger softening
And she looked up in surprise
Memories crowding, anger pushed back
Thoughts of times spent sharing joys

His hands reached out and pulled her to him
Kiss of love mixed with anger
Her fists against his chest between them
Pursed lips meeting his in wonder

Rage, confusion, love, frustration
Mingled in the kiss not broken
Kiss returned, the battle changing
Passion rising most unbidden

Rough, inflamed, love now stormy
"*******!", "*****!" feelings broken
Grasping arms, kisses fierce
"Kiss me!" "Shut up!" words spoken

Clothes torn off in disarray
Carried to the bedroom laughing
Wondering at the power of love now
Fire now with one idea fueling

Fury turned to aid each other
They lay upon the bed now sated
Thinking now of cruel words spoken
Of spite and hurt the thoughts abated

"I'm Sorry." "Me too." clasping hugs now
Tears for all bad thoughts end
"It was silly." "Shut up and kiss me"
It is thus all fights should bend.


Great souls have wills; feeble ones have only wishes.

~ Chinese Proverb ~


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-25 07:53 PM


fighting to an ending, this...wow!

Martie
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2 posted 2001-01-25 08:57 PM


Bill--Interesting how anger and passion sometimes remind us of love.
Wilfred Yeats
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3 posted 2001-01-25 11:25 PM


Karilea-
I've always been fascinated how friends - who seem to "fight" really are communicating love - an acknowledgement of differences - that don't deny their real love for one another - - It's not me - nut I believe it's real - Thank you

Martie-
I guess love and passion can be a battle of sorts too - Thank you

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