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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Were I to identify by example the fondest wishes of my life for all the years remaining and retroactively the past no phrase could claim it better than to say Waking next to you each morning Stands out most clearly no preciseness here as long as my nose inhales your sweet scent if you've arisen first yet ideally to open my eyes to see your arm thrown across my chest or your head nestled in the crook of my neck fills me with awe fires as it seems it always has my passion and all the protective feelings Matters not we've not yet brushed nor that we've schedules unmet undiminished are my desire for you you hold me together you're my glue Imagining our ease in closeness those caresses without number wakening the slumbered host kisses as hummers take nectar Thinking of our evolution naked through 'jamas through naked again an occasional bit of lace feathering my face reawakening the quickened pace or other sleeping venues where I'd wake and stare upon the beach at your sweet features or your form stretched out in langorous grace Your eyes, a measure of swift fire I've learned to read there your desire As kisses on your belly place to watch upon your face a trace half-opened lids and secret smile I love going south you so beguile Four lips pout, pucker cupid's bow swelling red with rosy glow my ministrations touch just so Heaven's not so far away we then caught in celestial sway this first meet, I remember still this day To the top with teeth clinched tight Mortal sounds all through the night back to the earth and all's alright A filet is my favorite dish but truth be told you're my fondest wish I expect to pass through life but once. If, therefore, there be any kindness I can show, or any good thing I can do for any fellow being, let me do it now as I shall not pass this way again. ~ William Penn ~ [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats! My office was cool a few moments ago...but no more... well done, Sir! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Morning Wilfred, Very nicely done, and an enjoy to read. BC |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--when you dip your pen into your heart to write, nothing can compare. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea- the apartment here is cold - I wish my own writing did as much for me - Thank you ~G!~ Bill= If I pleased you - i must be doing something right -  thank youMartie- your replies always bring me a smile Thank you |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sounds so lovely...waking cuddled up to you We all have wings...some of us don't know why |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) What a lovely, romantic poem! She is a very lucky person indee, Wilfred, to share a beautiful heart such as yours! May this wish and all others you've made last forever. Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you're such a romantic.... (that south line killed me! ROFL)... and the jammies and lace thing.... good grief, bill! you make this stuff up or is it inspired by actual experiences?.. hehe... never mind, it's poetry, not my business... could be fiction... i know ALL of my poetry is fictional *g  ... take care, enjoyed the write |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Paula- No one loves snuggling more than I do - ~S~ thank you Mistletoe Angel- a lovely reply - I like to think I'm the lucky one - even if much of this is 'yet to be realized' fantasy Doreen - a little imagination a little fantasy - a lot of wishful thinking - here's to more 'going south' - for both of us LOL Thanks [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well my friend........I do believe you just passed the bounds of great and went on to the plains of awesome. Very cool images pouring out in this one but I am not about to bring them up in here. Loved the read my friend. Nice to see that someone still knows the way south around here. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Mark - LoL - you and Doreen - thank God for you both - I need all the smiles I can get these days |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Why Wilfred, this is...this is....oh my goodness, this is really something!!!!!!!!! Kathleen |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah Bill, some things never change. I swear sometimes we have thoughts so alike when we write. I am glad to see your sweet words again dear friend. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Irish- Reading your reply brought a great big grin to my face - could almost imagine your expression - Thank you Gentle Spirit= Hey old friend - "I swear sometimes we have thoughts so alike when we write" (thanks for that - love to read such words) Thanks again ~WG~ |
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