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Hidden Corners of My Mind
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Hidden Corners of My Mind |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This one was from a challenge on another site. To write a poem with the title herein. Hidden Corners of My Mind Virginia Salter a secret place, from friends and lovers, even kin don’t know what’s there and quite often, it’s my endeavor to keep it hidden from my own care to ignore the needs that dwell within the recesses deep in folds to place walls that bar my vision denying grips that grab to hold for if I know not what needs attention it can’t plague me hour by hour then perhaps my “Pollyanna” can see rainbows in a shower as I venture keeping burdens secreted deep in a vault I may entertain the notion what goes wrong’s just not my fault if errant ways don’t show their faces how might anyone yell, “Shame!” so I’ll claim there are no traces of that which I’d be given blame yet there is One of great omniscience that sees beyond my foolish tries even those I feed my conscience attempting hide what therein lies so then with humble adoration I relent my inane ways and in deep prayer of supplication I give to Him past/future days © September 13, 2000 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh this is just so so true...what we try to hide from ourselves can never be hidden from God,,,but still we try...this is great |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* well done, I think we all have little hidden corners of our minds where we don't let anyone in. This was written so very well. Thank you for the glimse into you that you have shared with me. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
VAS, good morning. Powerful one here. I think you've lived up to your challenge. I'ts so difficult to keep a part of who we are hidden and locked up inside. I feel you. Great job! HUGS! JCGF |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi VAS, Wonderful writing here, very much enjoyed this one, and the wisdom in it, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you all for reading and your sweet, encouraging comments. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely poem Vas...enjoyed your words very much..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you, Victoria, so happy you enjoyed! |
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