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JCGF
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0 posted 2001-01-19 09:59 PM


The content of this poem, due to its mature theme, has been transferred to the Adult Forum. Please carefully read the guidelines for posting in one of the forums that are open to the general audience at Passions......some are as young as 8 or 9 years old, perhaps even younger. Thank you and welcome to Passions!

Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-20-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Tammy - All Rights Reserved
Lynn32
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1 posted 2001-01-19 10:28 PM


Wow, you are a passionate person!  Good job expressing yourself!
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-01-19 10:29 PM


Welcome to Passions!  Check your e-mail for a special welcome!
athena4
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3 posted 2001-01-19 10:42 PM


JC,
    What a magical expression of love. Beautiful!
             Elise

SEA
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4 posted 2001-01-20 12:00 PM


JCGF~ Welcome!   This is sensual......loving and beautiful.......WOW! What an entrance   -SEA
doreen peri
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5 posted 2001-01-20 12:59 PM


erotic! passionate! somehow sounds familiar... LOL.. was i there? no!!! that wasn't ME!!! that was YOUR lover~! but, believe me, i DO know that i had sex 2x because i had 2 kids but you actually make it sound like FUN!!! *g... don't mind me... i'm just a passions of poetry regular who rambles on and i DO love acronyms... what's your name stand for, anyway? LOL... enjoyed the verse.. made me ummm.... whoa... feel pretty good about life... *sigh*... well, for a moment anyway but.... tomorrow i need to go the library and the book store and the grocery store and wash the car and clean the house  and do the laundty and afterwards, when i get back...? i'll read this again and try to figure out how you got lucky because it appears you've found such wonderful love in your life!!! (unless of course, this write is fiction, which all of MINE are, btw, if you ever have the opportunity)

i'm rambling! hehe... but i mean every word... enjoyed the lines... draw me a few more! and what i'm trying to say is...

fine writing here!  

omigod, this person will never read me now... i'm obviously a NUT!!! open the doors to the 'stute, i'm coming back in... and people wonder why just a few days ago, all i typed was... "WOW!" hehe *g  

please forgive me... just wanted to say...

Welcome to Passions! LOL...  and..thanks for the read!

snowpants
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6 posted 2001-01-20 01:09 AM


Great write!  I love it!  Welcome to Passions!

sp  


I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

Poeminister
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7 posted 2001-01-20 01:11 AM


Welcome to Passions!!  you've penned a wonderful piece...look forward to reading more from you...

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


VAS
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8 posted 2001-01-20 01:37 AM


Welcome to Passions.  I'm fairly new here myself.

You did a nice, nice job with an extremely sensual poem without getting grossly explicit.  Ah, that is how it is beautiful, that's how it stays beautiful.  Well done!

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2001-01-20 01:50 AM


Welcome to passions, and with a passionate debut! and don't mind doreen...she's actually very cool, calm and collected....grin.
dgvarner
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10 posted 2001-01-20 01:54 AM


big welcome to you and all your passion!!  bring on some more of THAT stuff!!  weedoggies!

great write!  

(LOL @ doreen!!)

hugs, g

dgvarner
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11 posted 2001-01-20 01:54 AM


OOPS!  double posted ..sorry!  

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nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2001-01-20 07:41 AM


I also enjoyed your words this morning....JF


and a note for Doreen, your response was so good I had to read it several times also...*s  hope you got some sleep last night..sounded like you may have needed it. hugssss

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



JCGF
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13 posted 2001-01-20 10:02 AM


Lynn32.. Thank you

Sunshine .. Wow!  How thoughtful.  I can't thank you enought for turning my poem into a card.  Thanks again.

Athene4 ... Elise, thank you.

Snowpants... Thanks

Sea, I'm so pleased you like it.

Poeminister, VAS, Serenity, dgvarner and nakdthoughts.... Thank so much   I feel so warm and fuzzy to the great response.

Doreen!!!  WOW!  Your response was fantastic!  I can't say thanks enough!  What on overwhelmingly feeling of welcome I got when I read it.     Sure hope I can do this again.  For all of you!  Thanks again and again!  
ME

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