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Verma
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since 1999-10-25
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0 posted 2001-01-17 12:25 PM



Blue

The feelings I hold deep within myself
Are not too good for my life or my health
People around, they stand and gaze,
Whilst me, I feel, I need some praise.

I cannot go on, like this for long,
That’s why I felt I must write this song,
People stop, they stare, and watch what I do,
Why oh why do I feel so blue?

You! It’s you! You are the one,
Who gave me hope, then left me alone
There was a time when you made me smile,
But I’ve not had that feeling for a long, long while.

I wait & pray that the day will come,
When you’ll come back to me, so we can be as one.
Tell me now, do I wait in vain,
Or is there hope that you’ll end my pain?


~~STEVE~~

Since I wrote this poem, things have started to look up, and my girlfriend is about to have a baby. It just goes to show that no matter how bad things get, they can always get better…..




[This message has been edited by Verma (edited 01-17-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-01-17 01:16 PM


Steve~ Congratulations, I hope the baby is born healthy, and I'm very happy to hear all is better!   -SEA
Frankie
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since 2001-01-10
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2 posted 2001-01-17 01:30 PM


Steve - Congratulations on the baby...as for the other I know this feeling too well and am still waiting.....never give up hope.

Frankie

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