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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2001-01-16 12:38 PM


Dont come knocking
at my door

Love dont live here
anymore

All it took was a
twist of fate

Now my loves at
heavens gate

The good Lord giveth
and He taketh away

I know this is true
He took my love that day

All thats left is
darkness and tears

And so many lonely
painful years

It put an end to
what had just begun

It took away my
morning sun

I want to scream
I want to cry

What I want most is to
lay down and die

Take the cowards way out
it wouldnt take long

But he wouldnt want that
so I have to be strong

Strong enough to let
him rest

All for him I
give my best

So dont come knocking
my hearts not here

Its buried right there
with him for the rest of my years

© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

1 posted 2001-01-16 12:46 PM


We still love you Paula
Here is a smile for you

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2001-01-16 12:51 PM


Yea we all love ya Paula. Sy
CocoBaci
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

3 posted 2001-01-16 01:38 PM


me luvs u too
*~coco~*

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2001-01-17 05:52 AM


Paula,
Hang in there.
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Marsha
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
5 posted 2001-01-17 06:23 AM


Paula love, this is a fabulous write, you're letting it flow, and it's flowing beautifully
Love and stuff
                   Mushy
                      

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
6 posted 2001-01-17 11:23 AM


..youre stronger than you think  ...  

glad youre coming here to sift your heart paula..its a good crowd of friends to help you along.. and we WANT to hear from you..so sift til youre hearts content..  

hugs,g


"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2001-01-17 01:38 PM


Paula it is an unfortunate part of life that sometimes something happens to us or loved ones around us that we have no control over and suddenly our secure life falls apart and is not special anymore...it is in these times that we feel every ounce of pain that seems to exist and in these time we must gather every piece of strength we can find to make it through...my thoughts and prayers are with you...you will make it through...James
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