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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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the sun shone on me that's how I knew she was there and I felt her love ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beautiful Sven  -SEA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Very romantic haiku, filled with such love and tenderness! I loved it! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven love, utterly utterly wonderful, how is it that you can say in so few words what takes me pages. And you say it far better too love.  Talent will out they say, and it will because this shines with it.Totally beautiful work Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~sigh~ WOW Sven, I hope you tell her time and time again....How lovely this is... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful, short and sweet, Sven...that's the way I like it! Nathan |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely haiku. Nicely penned. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most beautiful Haiku....she will love it... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A lovely haiku PoetFriend... *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
SEA, thank you my friend. . . Noah, thank you for reading!! And for your wishes. . . Mushy, now love, you know that you're no slouch either. . . but thank you love for reading. . . Greeneyes, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Nate, always knew you were a get-to-the-point kind of guy!! Thanks. . . Poeminister, thank you my friend. . . Sunshine, I hope so. . . PoetFriend Coco. . .thank you my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, love in a circle as long as the sun's shining it comes back to you. ...and your sun is shining brightly lately. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
the sun shone on me that's how I knew she was there and I felt her love Love it my friend absolutely love it ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, Beautiful! May you always know she's there... Much love, Elise |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well goodbye dark, hello love, Mr. Romance is back! This is just beautiful! I luv it, I luv it!  This is now one of my favourite haikus! Should I start calling you Dr. Love from now on? LOL!Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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