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A Basket of Bliss
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A Basket of Bliss |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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A Basket of Bliss Fineness is the thread of life that’s woven into silk Sweetness is the nectar drops of honeysuckle milk Delicateness is painted onto lily petal's white Joy is soaring on the edge of eagle wing in flight Exuberance is plunging down the waterfall of rage Strength is hammered into granite’s eons of its age Love is branded on the face of a white and chestnut mare Adoration is in the heart of the foal whose in her care Beauty is the lense of the eye capturing a rose Wonderment is anywhere imagination goes Splendor is our lust for gazing into midnight’s sky And all that shines before us is so quickly passing by If I could somehow gather a basket full of bliss It would contain your precious love, and in it, all of this Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-19-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Beauty is the lense of the eye capturing a rose Wonderment is anywhere imagination goes Splendor is our lust for gazing into midnight’s sky And all that shines before us is so quickly passing by If I could somehow gather a basket full of bliss It would contain your precious love, and in it, all of this ====================== what a perfectly beautiful way to start my day ... a sonnet by Liz ... poetic melodies to sing in the sunrise ... just so lovely madame poetess  When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You truly have a gift, Elizabeth. Kathleen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Instead of a basket of bliss How about a basket of kiss? You deserve it for this wonderful poem. Love Sy |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wonderful! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Elizabeth~ this is very soft.....and quite beautiful  -SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bringing flora, fauna and the animal world together in this piece was sheer genius...and a better write is hard to find...we love this Lady Santos...thank you so much for sharing.... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A delicate, tender piece from your heart. You pen love so true and wonderous. Beautiful sentiments and the last two lines end it perfectly. Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Perfectly woven, wonderfully blissful! I so enjoyed reading this, Elizabeth. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You always bring such lovely images to my mind through your words, Elizabeth! Just lovely! Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Liz~ What a perfect basket it would be...well penned indeed ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Oh, how you've touched us all with this beauty. 'Love is branded on the face of a white and chestnut mare Adoration is in the heart of the foal whose in her care' PERFECT ! JUST PERFECT ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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