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“A Woman’s Heart” (3000 beats!)
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“A Woman’s Heart” (3000 beats!) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 A woman’s heart is an ocean of secrets, awash in her memories of love… A place to keep hidden her dreams and her longings, as vast as the heavens above… The heart of a woman can hold many treasures, some kept there in spite of their pain… And sometimes her secrets are shared with another, who knows what that sharing will gain… Deep down in that heart wells a pool of desire… A calling, a yearning, a need… To touch and to hold, then to nurture the planting, of love and it’s fragile new seed… Look into her heart, with it’s trove of her treasures, be careful to keep them in place… And you’ll be rewarded in love without measure, as seen through the eyes on her face… :)>>Smiles from Sunny<<:) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
3000 tempoed, musical, shining beats it is.... well done my Sunny1 |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
CONGRATULATIONS on 3000!!  Beautiful poem to celebrate with......... ~SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ Very, very nicely done. Congratulations, sweet poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sunshine ~~~ Thank you so much, and as Sonny and Cher once said....."the beat goes on"!!  ~~~ SEA ~~~ Oh, I'm glad I can share this with you....it means a lot to me!! ~~~ Marge ~~~ Thank you, from a poet who holds you in the highest regard and admires your work!! :)>>Smiles from Sunny<<:) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
as beautiful as is the picture - the poem outshines it greatly |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
CONGRATULATIONS HON ON #3000 lovely words too..enjoyed HUGS. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Wilfred ~~~ Oh, thank you so much for your beautiful reply....it is a treasure I shall always keep! ~~~ V ~~~ It is so nice to be able to share with such special friends......thank you!! :)>>Smiles from Sunny<<:) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Congratulations with your 3000 beats....and you celebrate it with an outstanding piece. love it, and will look forward to the follow 3000. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed this heart has shown a friend to many a poet to all and a life to the world. . . Congratulations my friend. . . here's to the next 3,000!! ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Charisma ~~~ Thank you so much for coming to share with me. It's good to know that there are still some friends out there!! thank you!! ~~~ Sven ~~~ Thank you, my friend, for being just that. I guess it is a small party I'm throwing here, but I am truly glad you came.... :)>>Smiles from Sunny<<:) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A woman’s heart is an ocean of secrets, awash in her memories of love… A place to keep hidden her dreams and her longings, as vast as the heavens above… ================ this is so lovely Sunny.. well done imagery and rhyme flow and congrats on your milestone ... very nice work take care jm When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh my goodness, this is spectacular SUNNY1... I read your poem once then I scrolled back up to top and viewed image then I re-read it again and what can I say sweetie, "ya got talent"... Me is smiling at U... *~coco~* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
FELICITATIONS on 3000th post I forgot to post this in message above... *~coco~* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hey darlin twin...you touch my very soul with this one...looks like we made our 3 about the same time LOL so whats new? Congrats darlin |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
CONGRATUALTIONS!!! Truely a wonderful write to celebrate your 3000th post. Now for a gift to you just because I know you want to lift a graphic now and then.......I am leaving one for you to go with your next one of the heart.  |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Hi Sunny Such a Heartfelt poem from my favorite poet May love reign in your life,and all your secrets have happy endings.............. Your bigest fan CONGRATUATIONS!! bbent ~ live and let live ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A wonderful 3000 Sunny...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
CONGRATS! on 3000. With such a wonderful piece of writing you celebrate! May you write many thousands more! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Congratulations on your 3000 posts and what a lovely way to do it!!! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful flow to these precious words Sunny ... just wonderful! Congratulations on 3,000 ... a beautiful poem to mark this milestone! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sunny, This is stunning. You have captured the essence of a woman's heart. A very worth poem to celebrate 3000 posts. Congratulations on this wonderful poem Liz |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ jm ~~~ So good to have your best wishes today, and I thank you....means a lot!! ~~~ Coco ~~~ What can I say to thank you, besides just that?! You have always been such a great friend.....talk about talent!!! ~~~ Paula ~~~ Oh, my twin.....it is onward and upward we go together!! I love sharing with you....you have become a part of my being.... ~~~ Mark ~~~ You are truly the brother that I had always wanted.....you're always there to give me back my smile, and I am smiling now with this beautiful graphic that I didn't have to 'lift'!! Ha!! Thank you!! ~~~ bbent ~~~ You know what a special place you hold in my life, and you also know how much I love secrets......especially those with happy endings!! ~~~ James ~~~ Oh how good it is to see you, and I do thank you also for your wishes!! ~~~ ethome ~~~ Thank you, and may we share the road of words together!! ~~~ Irish Rose ~~~ You have been a true inspiration to me all along the way, and I am grateful for your poems of grace and beauty!! Thank you!! ~~~ Kit ~~~ I cannot tell you how many times I have read your writing, and just wished I could achieve a small portion of the beauty that comes to you so naturally!! Thank you, my friend!! ~~~ Liz ~~~ You have in me a most dedicated fan....I seek out your thoughts and words with each day. Never stop your wonderful writing!! And I do thank you!! :)>>Smiles from Sunny<<:) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Now this is beauty in it's truest form...I love this tender piece praising the essence of a woman and I just love the graphic as well! Take care, Melissa< !signature--> The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
My sweet friend, you have a beautiful heart, and I love the way you penned this. Congrats on 3000+ , and know you are appreciated. Sandra |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
how appropriate that this one be so heartwarming... |
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