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Fly Me To The Moon |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~fly Me To The Moon~ ~*~ Fly me to the moon we'll not lose the way, a white rosebud of ghostly grace lifting arms with wings of baby breath as we dance in the wind of diamond dust ~*~ Touch in the gentle rain, gather crystal drops among the stars, as the clock strikes midnight we'll pick the perfect rose ~*~ If petals should fall to the earth you'll find me there among red rose petals, in the meadow of your heart BloomingRose ~The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious~ Albert Einstein |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is without a doubt... a tribute of the purest love... and a crystal gift to all... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!! BR~ What a most devine write, beautiful my friend, simply beautiful  ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Fly me to the moon we'll not lose the way, a white rosebud of ghostly grace lifting arms with wings of baby breath as we dance in the wind of diamond dust =============== Deb this is stunning... simply beautiful..wonderful imagery. one of your best. very well done!! take care jm |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
This is so beautiful! I love the images... "lifting arms with wings of baby breath as we dance in the wind of diamond dust" *has to sigh again* I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully written Deb..loved it.. lovely images..~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sunshine~ Thank you, so glad you enjoyed Tracie~ Sending warm sunshine your way! Thank you, Janet~ You are always so kind with the comments you leave me...hugs for you Breathe~ Thank you, sending sprinkles of diamond dust your way! Victoria~ Thank you so much for reading |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Fly me to the moon.........what beautiful thoughts. You write of this so well. Great job. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
very beautiful, thanks AP |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely! The title had me singing the song, but I can't remember past the title. Except that it might be... Fly me to the moon and we will dance among the stars... Your poem is vivid, tender, loving. Wonderful read. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
OH yeah my friend. Look who has climbed to the next level in her poetry. This one holds beauty in every line and you most definitely show a love of purity in it. Can you see this cowboy smiling? He is......you have grown so much and it is a pleasure to have watched this far and I look forward to seeing where you take it from here. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ On the wings of angelic thoughts you fly. The moon is but a heartbeat away. Lovely, dear friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
BloomingRose, I must agree here a true tribute to love.. wonderful write. Parker |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"If petals should fall to the earth you'll find me there among red rose petals, in the meadow of your heart" This is a beautiful rendition of love Deb ... filled with delicate imagery, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
bump because it deserves it |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Wow! This really is beautiful. I can't really say any more than that it really is exquisite. Excellent write ~Becky~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Gentle S~ Thank you, AP~ Glad you like it. Thanks. VAS~ I am not sure of the words to the song either, but I think you have the right one in mind. Thank you for your sweet comment. Mark~ Ever the encouraging one, thank you. Marge~ Flying away tonight on heavenly wings of moonlight. Beats calgon! *Hugs* Parker~ Thank you much! Kit~ Love is sometimes like a dream. Mark~ Thanks for the bump! Becky~ Thank you, glad you enjoyed the read. |
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