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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-01-11 03:24 AM


Quake Gently Across My Night
~*Marge Tindal*~

Step lightly upon this heart of mine
Quake gently across my night
Tender is the remember
of your footprints
As the sun of you
kisses my morning-after
Sweet reverie is mine






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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1 posted 2001-01-11 03:28 AM


Margie~
I marvel at your inspiration, always here with something so incredible to read....I thank you for that  
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Marsha
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2 posted 2001-01-11 06:52 AM


Margie girl, this is truly outstanding, as always it's beautiful. Thank you
Take care
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-01-11 06:56 AM


I"M INSPIRED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


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4 posted 2001-01-11 09:08 AM


Ah....minds along planes, sweetly meeting ... I've done some quaking myself recently in write ... well done Marge ...
SEA
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5 posted 2001-01-11 09:38 AM


Marge~ you never,ever fail to amaze me, and make me smile   -SEA
VAS
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6 posted 2001-01-11 09:42 AM


Beautiful!  Being loved, being enjoyed, such  wonderful things!
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7 posted 2001-01-11 12:01 PM



A beautiful reverie it is...

Take care,
Melissa


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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8 posted 2001-01-11 12:11 PM


You have the ability to share a sweet memory, bringing it back to life right before my eyes.
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2001-01-11 04:14 PM


Tracie~
Inspiration is my breath of life.
I LOVE IT !  Thank you.

Marsha~
Thanks so much, poet friend.

Kathleen~
ME TOO !!!!!!!!

Karilea~
Yep ... and this little thing was the after-shock of my quaking !  

SEA~
I sure like knowing that !
I like smiles on you.

VAS~
The best of two worlds, indeed.

Melissa~
You know I'm glad that you enjoyed it !

INot2B~
As long as I'm sharing -
I'm a happy little camper !
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Lady Ollyne
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10 posted 2001-01-11 06:03 PM



When each night
overtakes mine consciousness
and slumbers me 'til morn
imprints are left upon waking,
my soul rising in sunlight kiss...
to smile upon a new day...

lovely, Lady Marge

Ollyne



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"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare


[This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (edited 01-11-2001).]

Wilfred Yeats
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11 posted 2001-01-11 06:08 PM


Just when I think i've stepped my poetry up a small notch - you come and raise the barrier. exceptional poem - and wonderfully compact - 5*'s

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2001-01-11 06:55 PM


LadyOllyne~
How I treasure inspired poetic responses.
Thank you so much for that lovely write.

Wilfred~
What a very, very sweet comment.
And thank you -
I don't believe I ever got 5*'s before !
*Hugs* to you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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13 posted 2001-01-12 12:36 PM


     OUTSTANDING<><><>INSPIRING<>
THOUGHTFUL.........WELL WRITTEN<>
        A KEEPER........AROHA

Poeminister
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14 posted 2001-01-12 12:44 PM


Marge--Lovely.  I like!

Poeminister

Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2001-01-12 07:14 AM


SoaringEagle~
You're such a sweetheart.
I hug you with all my heart.
Peace and love always.

PoeMinister~
Thank you - I'm glad.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mark Bohannan
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16 posted 2001-01-13 01:56 PM


I shall step lightly, but do you mind if I do it often so that you don't forget?  This was lovely my friend.  Yours is a heart to cherish tenderly at all times.
Kit McCallum
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17 posted 2001-01-13 01:59 PM


Simply beautiful Marge ... you portray so much through these lovely words, this is just splendid!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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18 posted 2001-01-13 02:14 PM


Marge...you are so gifted...

Everything you write is beautiful...you have such a way with words...and I am in awe...

*hugs you cuz you're so special*



I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

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19 posted 2001-01-13 03:23 PM


MarkB~
I could never forget you, love.
Your footprints are indelibly etched in my heart.
You can kiss my morning-after anytime !

Kit~
Thank you so much.
I love it when my thoughts reach out and touch someone.

Breathe~
Just sitting here appreciating your *hugs*.
I really do love sharing thoughts with others.
So very glad you find them to your liking.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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20 posted 2001-01-15 10:00 PM


WOW!   I missed this somewhere! I'm glad to come across it tonight.  


Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?


Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2001-01-15 11:05 PM


Temptress~
Thanks, hon ...
I'm glad you came across it too !
Always enjoy the reply.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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