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Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2001-01-12 08:32 PM


You have lost your way
Lost your heart
Lost your thoughts
Lost your dreams
Still I stand by you
With only my thoughts of being with you

Enraptured in every word that spills from your mouth
If I had the chance I would hold you close
Tell you everything that I have longed to say
I would show you that someone loves you
Even if you don't see it now
Why didn't I tell you then

You have lost your emotions
Lost your senses
Lost your feelings for people
Lost me
I thought that I knew you
I thought that I could be the one

Your one and only
I was sure that you could see how I felt in my eyes
Never can I hold on to that thought again
All I ever wanted to do was help you
Just for one chance to go back again
Why didn't I tell you then

Just a crush
Just a crush
Just to be crushed
Just to be crushed by you

You lost my respect
Lost my love
Lost my attention
Lost my feelings for you
My crush has been crushed all in one day by you
I thought that you knew

Just a crush
To be crushed by you

You knew how I hurt
You saw the pain building in my heart
The tension was there
I thought this was my chance
I guess I was wrong

Just a crush
Just a crush
To be crushed
To be crushed by you

Love,
Lady


Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


© Copyright 2001 Vynette M. Charles-Brooks - All Rights Reserved
Beckalini
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1 posted 2001-01-12 08:40 PM


Wow! This is powerful! An emotional and heart-felt write Lady. I enjoyed the read, but I felt your pain too. Keep smiling honey! Warm hugs to you,
~Becky~  

Ladycat
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2 posted 2001-01-13 08:36 PM


Thank you for listening and understanding. I was hurting a couple of years ago and now I finally got it off my chest. It made me feel so good. Thank you for reading it though.

Love,
Lady


Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


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