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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2001-01-10 11:14 PM



Of all that I endeavor,
Let me endeavor to know you more,
How your eyes glimmer,
How your smile lights up the room,
How knowing, without you,
I'm as a ship lost at sea,
Of all I know, let me endeavor,
To learn more,
Where you go,
What you do,
The many talents you bestow,
Let me know the gifts of you.
Of all I endeavor, let me endeavor,
To know you, not pass us by,
Let me strive for excellence,
When it comes to loving you.
In this pursuit of happiness,
Indeed I will find,
That love is soft, gentle and so kind,
Let me learn that love should not
be taken forgranted but endeavored,
Each and everyday.

© Copyright 2001 Rose - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-10 11:32 PM


Very pretty...

Stan
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since 2001-01-01
Posts 120
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2 posted 2001-01-10 11:35 PM


Rosebud,
You write from the heart to the heart and show the watermarks of an honest and caring woman.  Whomever this is written for is fortunate indeed!


Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
3 posted 2001-01-10 11:41 PM


thank you so much Sunshine, and Stan thank you, the heart can't help to express sometimes words that go unspoken.
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