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Amature2
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0 posted 2001-01-10 10:05 PM





Indeed

You enter my life, for what i can see
Offer to warm the chill within me
There still are some issues that havent been told
But I really do want to get out of the cold
The feelings I have by others is shared
And just like you, no tears have been spared
The lonliness is there, but the future looks bright
You dont need to continue fighting the fight
Tossing and turning, how can you dream
Then thoughts of you appear on the scene
The window to Space is an infinite place
Your friendship and honor i will not disgrace
But if two hearts are to be free
I offer my hand Indeed

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-01-10 10:07 PM


This is really wonderful.......   -SEA
Amature2
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2 posted 2001-01-10 10:10 PM


Thank you for wonderful welcome to Passions. I'm already starting to like this place. As my name says, I am an Amature but am willing to learn , a friend told me to put my thoughts into writings, so here it goes. Thank You

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I will be looking out for more from you......and your friend gave good advice   -SEA
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4 posted 2001-01-11 01:20 AM


this is so beautiful........very touching
Lady Lightning
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5 posted 2001-01-11 01:55 AM


You enter my life, for what i can see
Offer to warm the chill within me
There still are some issues that havent been told
But I really do want to get out of the cold

Very good , I liked this much..  Welcome!!
~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

tracie66
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6 posted 2001-01-12 07:30 AM


Inspiring words, very tenderly written...well done  
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



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