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Dancing On A Candy Cane Rainbow
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Dancing On A Candy Cane Rainbow |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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            ~*Marge Tindal*~ I'm dancing on a candy cane rainbow Sweet twizzled treat of delight Stepping across a peppermint skyway with cotton candy clouds to my right Going swinging high in a gumdrop tree Spicy flavor, oh my ! Atop a candy cane rainbow floating on a puffed-up marshmallow sky Sliding down Chocolate Mousse Mountain into a vat of Raspberry Frappé I'm dancing on a candy cane rainbow Sweet illusion just headed my way Gonna cross over that rainbow on a licorice whipped rope of fun Reaching into that pot of gold gathering foil-wrapped doubloons, one by one Come dance on my candy cane rainbow Flung across a lemon-drop sky With friendship sweetly dipped in this sugar-coated song so sweetly sighed ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge, Sugar-coated song indeed...what a sweet peice. Put a smile on my face...and I thank you muchly for that. Poeminister |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I wanta dance, sounds like heaven, but how fattening is it? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sweetly rainbowed perfection confection... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Marge ... I'm going to have to limit myself to one verse of this per day Have to watch the old sweet tooth  I think I can actually taste this poem |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh wow ~ just reading this I know that I'll have to buy a bigger pair of jeans tomorrow!!!! What a "sweet" poem Marge, now I must go see if there's Christmas candy left around here..... Bonnie |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I gained ten pounds just reading this...how sweet it is |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Margie what a treat this was, Mmmm Mmmm and I am such a sweet tooth and darn I've just brushed my teeth before bed  thanks for the sweet read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ To know it gave you a smile - makes it so worthwhile. Martie~ Patooie ! There - calories all gone ! Karilea~ I think my little muses are playing in the candy canes. Rex~ LOL ! There just may be an inspirational verse in your reply. Bonnie~ Well ..... YOU'VE BEEN MISSED ! Sure ..... mention CANDY and you come out of hiding ! Paula~ Well, hon - This rainbow looks good on you ! Tracie~ Tee-Hee ! SWEET DREAMS ! *As a side-note ~ A man I work with brought in a BUNCH of after-Christmas candy canes that he got for ten cents a box ... When I saw them ... I exclaimed that it looked like a candy cane rainbow ! He's gonna LOVE this one today ! Soooo ... Howard Ferguson, this one's for you ! Thanks to each of you for dancing on my rainbow ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is so delightful! It brightened my morning! What a treat Marge, your mind is precious Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Delightful, absolutely, with just the right amount of sweetening. You are certainly full of creativity and bounce! Well done! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
MARGE, you just capture the sweetness so well I'm in awe at the heart and soul of you that writes such adoring poetry... I can always always count on you to uplift a spirit when feeling blue... My applause for this one you had me up on my chair in a kinda dance of a candy cane flair.. You are just2sweet Thank you for this delightful N 'ohSoSweet' read coco pssst... I must show this one to my lil one she'll get a treat outta the graphics and the way I shall read it to her shall make her do a twirl or two |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Adorable as only you can write Marge...i dont know where you find those delightful graphics haa...loved it..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow Marge...you never cease to impress....what sweet imagery.....you're definitely in a class of your own Miss thang...you go Marge......an entertaining and brilliant write! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ quote: I'm printing this one out ! ! ! LOL ! Thank you, love. VAS~ Thanks. I do love to bounce ! Dani~ Just to know it's shared with a child - makes me so glad I wrote it. Thank you for hugging my heart. Victoria~ Thanks, really glad you like it. Nate, my friend~ Actually, I'm just a candy-cane-aholic. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, you eating anything sweet could be called cannibalism!  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this is such a sweet treat!! I loved this.......of course, I have a huge sweet tooth!! -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ CLASSIC ! SEA~ Love that you love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
M&M'S ARE FINE....... THIS POEM IS DIVINE.......... LOVYA..... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoaringEagle~ And maybe for you and Tony I need to throw in a scoop of 'midnight' ice cream ! Let's see - One scoop or two ? Love YOU ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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